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He said, she said

July 31, 2016 By Paula Stahel

 The stories I write are character driven. So nearly all the story is in dialogue. Is there any way around writing “he said” or “she said all the time? It’s really boring. And it’s boring the readers because people in my writing group say they get tired of hearing it when it’s my turn to… [Read More]

Filed Under: Description, Dialogue, Uncategorized, Verbs/Adverbs Tagged With: dialogue, said

A Traveler’s Lament

July 10, 2016 By Paula Stahel

A Traveler’s Lament

  When one cannot be traveling, one can always be traveling…through books. Before the age of four I taught myself to read. Each page had one colorful image and four words. Only one page is still vivid in my mind: “I is for ibis.” Above those words was something birdlike. I could not believe such… [Read More]

Filed Under: Books, Fiction Tagged With: fiction, literature, novels

School’s out…4 EH-vuh!

June 26, 2016 By Paula Stahel

  About a year ago I got serious about writing my memoir. It was a struggle to get it started but by late spring I was feeling pretty good about it and might actually have something to share. Then came summer. My husband’s a teacher so he was off for a couple of months. Then… [Read More]

Filed Under: Creativity, Solitude, Uncategorized Tagged With: creativity, relationships, solitude

Finessing Fiction from Fact

June 12, 2016 By Paula Stahel

Finessing Fiction from Fact

  I have been hired to develop a story treatment of a book written by a Santa Barbara resident. Her true story takes place in the late 1950s but was written just two years ago and it’s selling well. She would like to turn it into a motion picture because every time she does a… [Read More]

Filed Under: Creativity, Dreaming, Fiction, Meditation, Memoir, Treatment, Truth, Uncategorized Tagged With: Big T-truth, creativity, dreams, fictionalizing, little t-truth, meditation, memoir, movie treatment, structure, truth

Three Q’s for a Three-Day Weekend

May 29, 2016 By Paula Stahel

  I recently started writing third person and throughout are redundant “she” and “her.” I’m not happy with that. Any suggestions on structure to eliminate most of them? —TJ Dear TJ, This problem isn’t only related to third person. Whether writing in the third-person or first-person POV,* over-use of personal pronouns can become problematic. In editing… [Read More]

Filed Under: Grammar, Periodicals, Pronouns, Revision, Uncategorized Tagged With: adverbs, grammar, hyphenation, markets, pronouns, revision

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